Last week for literacy we learnt about of an explanation of sea turtles.

Title How turtles grow into adults

Date:2/08/2018

Sea turtles have existed since the Jurassic. They have lived for over 150 million years.When the mother turtle lays her eggs she looks for somewhere high to lay her eggs. Eggs First,deposited as a clutch of leathery, ping-pong ball-sized eggs into a nesting pit dug by its mother high on the beach. after the mother lays her eggs there will be one thousand eggs laid. Babies A small sea turtle is the size of your palm unfortunately 20% of the sea turtles will never hatch. Roughly a month and a half after having been laid,the surviving eggs hatch, squirm to the emerging from the sand along the way,debris,pitfalls,seagulls,crabs,racoons and other threats. Also only 50% of those that reach the surface will perish. Growing up Then find a whole new host of predators awaiting them; Various fish, dolphins, sharks, and sea birds, and when they run out of breath they will go up for air. Adults The survivors will increase in size,from that of a dinner plate at year one to that a dinner table,two decades later the survivors will be old enough to breed. So I will try and stop people from putting chemicals into the sea.The complete of this non-fiction story is that how sea turtles become adults. Also the sea turtles are endangered there is 7 species left.
	I like your introduction I like how you wrote the paragraph about the baby turtles because you used the right punctuation and simplified words. You just need to put more punctuation, you can also put more information to your growing up paragraph. And you can improve your conclusion by changing some ordinary words to scientific ones. But anyway, I liked how you explained your explanation. Angie - Buddy checked