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Friday, July 5, 2019

Who Am I

For literacy we had to create sentences about our selves and what we think were act like.We had to do metaphors and similes.If you don´t know what metaphors mean it means not using like or as.And similes mean the same thing or the same thing as it.I found comparing my self to people challenging.The easy thing was thinking of a really good word and writing it down and making my story better here´s mine.


Guess Who?

Her eyes are as dark as the night sky with a shooting star shooting in her eyes. My Hair is as puffy as a small puffy cloud going puff. Their Gratitude is as high as you can travel to the sun. I’am as fast as Usain Bolt but not a Cheetah. I’m so strong that I could probably beat Dwayne Johnson in money in the bank on WWE. My Manners that I say to people takes them out of their box and explodes with a big smile on their face. When I get bored I Ignore what’s happening around me. I love Cheetahs and Dolphins because cheetahs are fast and Dolphins live the life in the ocean.Sometimes my patients can be good when a three toed sloth goes to move.My Birthstone is a blue stone like the sun shining onto the sea. When I want to try something that’s fun I get excited. Everyday I put my hair into a ponytail.Also my favorite video game is Fortnite!

Wednesday, June 26, 2019

Broken.Paper Scissors Rock

Today we had to finish our Broken,Paper,Scissors Rock we had to watch a video and re write it in our own words and make it more interesting to read.The video was about this Rock man falling in love with this Fairy and she was Paper.Then he fell down the cliff and he saw a angry man as scissors cutting everything and anything that stand in his way they were trying to run away then they went into a dead end and paper went charging at scissors but scissors cut her in half then rock beat him up and I think he was dead here's mine.

Broken Rock,Paper Scissors

One afternoon I was just laying on the dry dirt near tremendously enormous stones under the hot parching sun. I heard beautiful singing on the same day it sounded familiar and I think I knew who it was.So I went over the rocks and looked over.It was paper the Fairy she was in the green delighted forest checking if all the flower’s were nice and colorful. At the same time she was growing more flowers everywhere so it can be nice and tidy.When I saw her I felt like my heart was filled up with joy and my heart was gonna burst with love.

When I was watching her on a rock I was gonna ask her on a date so I  jumped off the cliff but I put to much weight on the rocks so it fell on me and it made me tumble down the cliff.It felt like a colossal wave but with rocks.It was embarrassing I thought that she would never go on a date with me.But then she said
”Hey are you okay do you want some help” said paper.
Then I stuttered saying my words
”uumm bbhh douh”. 
In the distance I heard screeching So I turned around there was this crazy person coming after Paper I think it was a person?.He was cutting down everything and anything that stands in his way.

He started to get faster and faster so I grabbed Paper’s hand but I couldn’t because paper beats rock so I whispered to paper and said”Come quick that dark man is coming after you come on”That man was cutting the grass and cutting the tree 's.Paper looked back and went with rock.I grabbed her hand and  ran threw a forest and into this place that looks like Mars we ran everywhere but it was all dead ends, He caught up with us at another dead end Paper and I were petrified.

Paper whispered to me and said
”I’m sorry rock but that is my crazy ex I left him because he was being mean to me he’s probably jealous and want to get back with me but it’s okay, I can take care of it oh and by the way his name is Scissors”said Paper.Then she flew to Scissors as fast as the wind like a hurricane was coming but then!

Scissors cut her I ran over to her but Scissors came and hit me on my back,I was raging so I turned around and punched him.I upper cupped him and jumped really high like hulk.He looked at me and said to himself,”Why did I do this”said Scissors I smashed the ground I ran over to Paper I shook her to see if she was still alive.She was still breathing so I tried to pick her up but I was cracking but I didn’t care I would rather give up my life for a beautiful girl like her.I put her on a leaf when she cracking and cracking when I put her down I just died before she woke up.When she woke up she saw me and grabbed my head and said

”It would be a crying shame to let my tears go to waste”sais paper.

Friday, August 17, 2018

Proverbs

So this week we have been writing about proverbs and for science we talked about what is a solid,gas,and liquid and we had to put all the things in to the right place and you had to finish what we done last week and  he is some of my work about proverbs.

To hide one lie a thousand lies are needed

Great developers are hard to find.Let Toptal match you with top developer talent for your next project.If you tell the truth you don’t have to remember anything.if you lie you have to keep lying.





Better to be a free bird than a captive king

One interpretation of this proverb is that it is better to live simply and enjoy the freedom it brings,than being a mighty king with many responsibilities.


Eyes can see everything except themselves

The eyes are a window to your secrets and heart eyes can give everything away or can be like a shield and keep everything locked away.

Tuesday, August 7, 2018

Last week for literacy we learnt about of an explanation of sea turtles.

Title How turtles grow into adults
Date:2/08/2018

Sea turtles have existed since the Jurassic. They have lived for over 150 million years.When the mother turtle lays her eggs she looks for somewhere high to lay her eggs.

Eggs
First,deposited as a clutch of leathery, ping-pong ball-sized eggs into a nesting pit dug by its mother high on the beach. after the mother lays her eggs there will be one thousand eggs laid.

Babies
A small sea turtle is the size of your palm unfortunately 20% of the sea turtles will never hatch. Roughly a month and a half after having been laid,the surviving eggs hatch, squirm to the emerging from the sand along the way,debris,pitfalls,seagulls,crabs,racoons and other threats. Also only 50% of those that reach the surface will perish.

Growing up
Then find a whole new host of predators awaiting them; Various fish, dolphins, sharks, and sea birds, and when they run out of breath they will go up for air.

Adults
The survivors will increase in size,from that of a dinner plate at year one to that a dinner table,two decades later the survivors will be old enough to breed.

So I will try and stop people from putting chemicals into the sea.The complete of this non-fiction story is that how sea turtles become adults. Also the sea turtles are endangered there is 7 species left.
I like your introduction


I like how you wrote the paragraph about the baby turtles because you used the right punctuation and simplified words.



You just need to put more punctuation, you can also put more information to your growing up paragraph. And you can improve your conclusion by changing some ordinary words to scientific ones. But anyway, I liked how you explained your explanation.



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